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    11/17/2008

    朝.暮.思——游园三首

     
    朝.暮.思
    ——游园三首

     
    其一. 朝

    惺忪睡起，
    风吹帘动，
    碎影舞朝阳。

    园中多佳木，
    浓郁茏葱。
    奇花闪烁星罗，
    香熏气爽。
    几带清流满沁芳。
      
       
     其二. 暮

    古藤老树余霞，
    小桥流水落花，
    林道西风抱厦。
    夕阳西下，
    心上人在天涯。
     
     
     
     其三. 思

    人隔千里心咫尺。
    情依依，
    两相思，
    又岂只朝朝暮暮？
     
     
    PS：昨日得空游园，据一日所见所感之景、情，篡改古人诗得小作三首~
     
    曲：<一帘幽梦>
    4:49 PM | Blog it | 古色情怀

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    闲人 都市wrote:
    这植物园里的枯树还真有感觉！
    “人隔千里心咫尺。情依依，两相思，又岂只朝朝暮暮？”恩，明白，中午也想。。。
    Nov. 27
    落花水面 Hiwrote:
    to 飘蓝：呵呵，“浪漫得米话说啊”？那我倒真要去瞅瞅～
    to 原来：简单的心境，也被原来点中～
    to 微风：呵呵，行路中触景生情而已，一发不可收离我还久远着呢，希望有一天能～
    to 静希：呵呵，被大词人夸赞那真是荣幸的很～不过，也没啥辛苦滴，因为我爱学习一切好的东西，听的看的乐观方面的例子多了，也就学习来了，知足常乐嘛～
    Nov. 25
    词友 静希wrote:
    真是“有品皆有味”！改的好改的妙！
    细想来落花真是难：一个女生，那么远，工作那么辛苦，还总是笑对一切，值得我学习！
    Nov. 25
    微风品姿wrote:
    是什么让你诗意大发，一来就是三首。我等着欣赏你一发不可收.........
    Nov. 24
    原来wrote:
    朝朝暮暮人相思，字字句句心如水。
    Nov. 24
    飘蓝 ღwrote:
    偶又来啦～
    hoho，新版的起初看一点米感觉，后来慢慢喜欢了。尤其是普罗旺斯那一段，那真是浪漫得米话说啊～～o(∩_∩)o...比巴黎还赞～！
    Nov. 24
    落花水面 Hiwrote:
    to Sissi:呵呵，我也喜欢越剧和黄梅，豫剧也可以，喜欢越剧就是从看梁祝的<十八相送>起~
    to 一花：呵呵，“古道”还得改成“林道”，开始忘了~
    to 安奇：谢谢，欢迎~
    to 雨蜘蛛：过奖~
    to 有容：呵呵，姐姐懂我~
    to 飘蓝：新版的我瞥过两眼，因为太喜欢原来那部了~听你一说，有时间也听听这首~
    to 没入：呵呵，让没入夸的这么好，心里真是像蜜一样甜~
    Nov. 24
    没入人海wrote:
    因为这么美的图，这么美的诗还有这么美的音乐，我竟然这么晚才来欣赏，MSN都不告诉我，忒过分了，我投诉他们去！！！
    Nov. 23
    没入人海wrote:
    狠狠踩两脚！！
    Nov. 23
    飘蓝 ღwrote:
    偶也喜欢一帘幽梦，喜欢到想在房间里装一面珠帘。
    偶还喜欢新版中张佳倪唱的《相遇的魔咒》。hoho～
    Nov. 23
    飘蓝 ღwrote:
    心在一起，天涯也咫尺。
    o(∩_∩)o...
    Nov. 23
    容 有wrote:
    嘻嘻，落花思念心上人呢~
    Nov. 22
    winny winnywrote:
    有品皆有味。
    Nov. 22
    qi anwrote:
    周末快乐！
    Nov. 21
    一花一世界wrote:
    “古藤老树余霞，小桥流水落花，古道西风抱厦。夕阳西下，心上人在天涯。”
    改得好，改得妙啊~
    Nov. 20
    Sissi Swrote:
    恩~呵呵，不过我也就只喜欢越剧和黄梅戏而已~~别的倒是很少感兴趣~哈
    好啊！！！！！！以后有机会和姐姐一起配，嘻嘻，反正越剧也就是女儿戏嘛~~
    Nov. 18
    Sissi Swrote:
    呵呵~姐姐改得好噢~~~有点意思~哈哈
     
    Nov. 18
    落花水面 Hiwrote:
    to 闲茶：呵呵，你更悠“闲”呢~
    to 非鱼：MM过奖了，呵呵~
    to 原来：能得原来大哥好评，幸甚至哉~
    to 勿飞：haha，不会吧？我写的很好理解吧……^_^
    to 折梅：呵呵，具体场景具体应用~
     
    Nov. 18
    西洲折梅wrote:
    幸福的篡改……：）
    Nov. 17
    勿飞 ☆wrote:
    恩  落花姐姐这是谈恋爱了？结婚了？
    Nov. 17
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