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    7/16/2006

    醉花间.爱就一个字

      

    醉花间.爱就一个字

     

    情何错,

    爱何错,

    飞羽匆匆过。

    相见不相识,只叹缘之惑。

     

    园中梅紧锁,竞待云飘雪。

    不为银汉隔,翘盼两情悦。

    答应落落为她的小说旧爱.新欢》配词。。。受此重托,甚感荣幸,却也迟迟不敢草草落笔。。。如今,关于文中的前一部分--主人公与勇的故事,现只得一首,恐违其意,暂作初稿,以待再改^_^

    PS:

    这次买到回家的车票了,落花真的要小别空间几日了--回见^!^,愿各位朋友开开心心每一天!^_^

     

     

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    July 30
    过来问候,回来了没?
    July 30
    裘明磊wrote:
    回来了吗?
    July 29
    最近我也写了两首词
    不过都是随性做的,并不懂词的写作结构
    呵呵
    July 28
    落花什么时候回来?
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    July 28
    Sissi Swrote:
    呵呵,姐姐还没到家么?~
    July 28
    甜甜wrote:
    第一次来你就回家,有些遗憾哦~~
    July 25
    你回家就不算你了,我们做游戏去了
    July 23
    勿飞 ☆wrote:
    相见不相识,只叹缘之惑。
    哎    只叹缘之惑啊
    July 22
    落花,忘记一件最重要的事情,回来去我那里,别忘记在列表右边的访客登记簿摁手印呀,方便串门
    July 20
    落花我来了.
    谢谢你很用心的读我的小说,并赋词咏情.留言早就看到了,恰好我又开始进行了比较大篇幅的修改,所以没有及时回复.不知道你什么时候回来?家在那里呢?
     
    同时我看到大家的留言了,也挺感动他们跟着用心揣摩词的意境.不过他们都不知道故事原委,恐怕就容易领错了意,呵呵
    我当时看了词后,觉得意思出来些,但是还有些毛边的感觉,另外觉得意境还有待推敲.
    正好我把<阿甘正传>的介绍以及影评,还有电影曲都放在日志里了,分别在我那两个博客里.等你回来后看看,想想那枚羽毛漂浮的状态.
     
    也欢迎参与讨论的大家去我那里玩,有助一起探讨词境
    呵呵,落落谢谢落花和大家了.
     
    July 20
    Sissi Swrote:
    道家没?~嘿嘿
    July 20
    飘香wrote:
     
     
    缘不会惑,惑的是人。
     
    落花要回来了,祝回程愉快!
     
     
     
    July 19
    裘明磊wrote:
    祝一切都好.
    链接你.
    July 18
    卓--希wrote:
    假期愉快!
    July 18
    淡月梅花wrote:
    一路顺风!好好享受假期!
    July 17
    兜兜wrote:
    又一首词啊,佩服。
    暑假好好享受生活吧
    July 17
    爱没错,情没错。只是还不惑。
     
    回家的感觉是好的。祝顺利
    July 17
    卓--希wrote:
    竟待云飘雪?
    值得琢磨,推敲!
    只叹缘之惑
    好!
    July 17
    回家是好事,一路顺风^^!
    July 16

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